Tuesday, October 13, 2009
Essay Workshop
Thesis: Wilson’s political, moral, and economic reasons for U.S. policy change in 1917 strayed away greatly from traditional American values like manifest destiny, and Washington’s farewell address, that had originally been the values for the U.S. when making decisions in all situations.
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Hey--this is a good first pass at a thesis. I'll get back to you with more later but here's my initial response: manifest destiny and the farewell address are not necessarily VALUES. What are the values that lie behind those documents. Think about that and get back to me here. Then I'll take a look at your supporting paragraphs and topic sentences. Nice effort.
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